They called upon the eldest frog of the group and asked them to be their king. The elderly frog agreed and so the change begun. The frogs were called into their first swamp meeting with the king. The king went over specific rules and guidelines. The king said " if you do not like the rules of the Simple Swamp then you can leave and find yourself another one." The new frogs were not fond of the rules. They believed the rules were old fashion and outdated. However, they had respect for the king and decided to go find themselves another swamp. Though the trouble maker frogs had left the Simple Swamp, the frogs decided to keep the king encase future decisions needed to be made. The Simple Swamp frogs continued to live their simple life, until once again when troubled frogs found their way to the Simple Swamp.
Author's Note:
In the original fable there are frogs who live a simple life in a swamp. The frogs one day wanted a king and an official constitutions. Their calls were answered and they got a log as a king. However the log was not vocal or ruling enough for them and they asked for another king. Now they were sent an angry stork who started to gobble them up. I decided to keep the factors of the simple life, the rules, and the king in my story, however, I wanted to spice things up. I thought it would interesting to bring in more conflict in which would result in a king. I feel that it is like this in real life at times. The more conflict that arises in a situation, the more strict rules can get in that environment.
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This story is based on the fable "The Frogs Desiring a King" in Aesop's Fables.
Ha, first off, the image of a couple of cheerful frogs dueling on lily pads is pretty great. More seriously, though, I love the way you took the original setup, then added the second group of frogs to stir things up. It makes sense that it would take something fairly drastic to make the Simple Swamp frogs feel like they needed a strong leader, and the conflict you added with the newcomers made for a stronger plot than the original had. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI like your take on the story! I have never read The Frogs Desiring a King before so it was interesting to see the twists you added! I like the idea of there being tension that is eventually resolved at the end of the story. I thought that your addition of the female frogs "flirting" was funny! Your author's notes provide a good summary of the real story and about how you switched it up. I agree with your thoughts on having a king and about having strict rules changing the environment.
ReplyDeleteYour take on the story is great. I liked how they elected a leader in this instead of picking a log or a stork just because they wanted rules. Electing a leader because of the conflict with the new frogs was a good twist on the story. I also like the idea of frogs fighting over a lily pad. As I read that I tried to imagine frogs fighting and I pictured them jumping at each other and trying to tackle one another.
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